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Chủ đề: The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.


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Mở bài: paraphrase câu đề bài. Tức là viết lại câu của đề bài sử dụng từ vựng của bạn. 3 cách paraphrase phổ biến gồm: Synonyms, Word Order, Word Form

 Introduction: The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

Paraphrase: The graph shows the increase in population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington in the U.S. state of Oregon, between 1940 and 2000.

 

Overview: tìm 2 đặc điểm xu hướng chung của biểu đồ. Nhìn từ đầu biểu đồ đến cuối biểu đồ xem xu hướng chung của dây là gì? Là tăng? Giảm? Hay dao động liên tục?

E.g. In 1940, Columbia had the lowest population of the three counties, at around 25,000. This compared with about 30,000 in Yamhill and approximately 75,000 in Washington.

 

Body 1: 2 khổ thân bài của một bài biểu đồ dây thường sẽ là mô tả số liệu, xu hướng của số liệu. Lưu ý luôn luôn so sánh các thông tin với nhau, không mô tả riêng rẽ

E.g. By 1970, Columbia’s population had risen to just under 36,000. Although this appears on the graph to be a gentle increase, it is in fact an increase of approximately 50%. Yamhill’s population also rose by nearly 50% between 1940 and 1970: from 30,000 to just under 45,000. However, the greatest real increase was in Washington, where the population in 1970 had increased by approximately 75,000, to 125,000.

 

Body 2: như trên

E.g. The years 1970 to 2000 saw the populations of Columbia and Yamhill increase by approximately the same amounts that they had increased by the thirty years before. In 2000, Columbia’s population – at approximately 76,000 – was triple what it had been in 1940. Likewise, Yamhill’s population, at around 90,000, was almost triple what it was in 1940.

 

LƯU Ý: Sử dụng quá khứ đơn (ví dụ: increased, fell..) cho các năm trong quá khứ, ‘is expected/predicted to” khi đưa ra dự đoán cho các năm trong tương lai.

 

Source: consulting from the Internet